In the clearing we were unprotected
Their dying fire was soon extinguished
Our voices were soaked as we took our feet
Maple lead us in a sprint through the trees
Pine strode beside me as we dodged rain drops
Dashing from slight shade to slight shade like deer
Still, water seeped through our clothes undeterred
In a stand of trees I’d not before seen
We moved toward a looming, cone-filled pine
Beneath its full, low branches no drops fell
Our speeding hearts slowed as the rain increased
Beneath the tree was sacred and a home
The air smelled of balsam, sweet-rich with earth
Around the tree trunk were three feather strings
Collections of owl, jay and wren raiments
Maple knelt by a ring of grey-white stones
Placing logs within, she lit a small fire
Drops from her hair fell sizzling downward
Laughter and a smile lit her dripping face
Pine and I sank to the ground beside her
Warming and drying ourselves, we fire-gazed
Each flicker and dance of orange and red
Stole away the wet-cold and warm-calmed us
Pine stepped around the tree and was hidden
Chorus-called, she answered with a promise
Maple and I stirred coals and orange logs
Setting sparks to careening heaven-ward paths
With stick-pierced apples Pine returned to us
Gentle hands balanced the stick above coals
When the apples had blistered she withdrew
We drank the sweet juice and savoured the flesh
1 comment on “Dryad Rain Dash”
it sounds really weird when i red it to my senoirs
i never thought of how much bad comments i got about it from one person
please try to make some kind of fluencey in your poem making